hello all
the week has passed, and i have felt the erge to blog early all week but have resisted the temptation. this past week hasnt been very interesting for me i mainly sat at home all day with my good friend tom watching movies and facebook statusing about anything and everything i possibly can. I have only been doing nothing at all because im waiting for a response to the 20 od C.V's ive handed out in the past week. my aim for this blog is to let my followers and future followers about the special somone in my life, Tash Ross the most gawgus girl you'll ever meet. me and tash started txting eatchuther 2 years ago i got her number through a friend of mine, who also told me that she lived in Auckland (on the oposite island to mine in New Zealand) we got along almost instantly, id fallen in love with someone id never seen before but over the time we spent txting i felt like id known her my intire life, we could talk freely about almost anything and tell eatchuther what was up in our lives. I first met her on the 27th of december 2010 but prior to meeting her we had to count down the days witch was excusiatingly painful, during that time a wrote a piece of writing that expresed how i felt i really wanted to share that with u guys.
"How far can longing strech its cruel meaning.
I see you every night, but not in the sense i want it to be.
we count down the moons until we can embrace one another.
the thought and only the thought, of holding your body close to mine and feeling eatchothers warmth.
a more menassing thought than that,
is the unbearable wait for your soft looking lips to draw ever closer to mine.
the pain of waiting for time to creep to that slowely approaching day...
is agonizing."
Recently ive also been worried about my darling Tash, not being able to be there in times of need or emense stress is unbearable, especialy when the problems she is having ive had experience with aswel, lets just say fathers are real arseholes. well i better bid you adue for now folks because even though i have absolutely nothing to do, i havent got much else to write about, i just hope whoever reads this will hope i get a job soon because me alone hoping just isnt enough.
till next time :D
J. L. Penfold
Couple of thoughts;
ReplyDeleteIf you want to be a writer I would strongly recommend that you learn to spell.
Next you need to grasp the basics of English rather than wittering on using poor subtext and terrible gramma.
On the actual content, please enough of the bleeding hearts and life is so tough crap - have you read that girls blog?
Really?
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ReplyDeletei am starting a course tomorrow that involves getting my english sorted. i hope ur wishing me the best, because you wouldnt be posting constructive critacism if u weren't, and for a matter of fact i dont find life hard, i live almost every day in an up beat attitude, so kindly refrain from telling me what to and what not to write about :D
ReplyDeleteGood for you, get into the course and pass. Education is a tool and a gift, embrace it then use it.
ReplyDeleteNothing is for nothing work hard to get what you want, anyone can give up, be different succeed!